Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Odysseus Essay

Abigail Retallick
Odysseus Essay
Sophomore English
20 May 2008
When one contemplates the essence of a hero, one can only be reminded of the Greek archetype Homer recorded. The story of The Odyssey was an oral narration told from generation to generation about one man's odyssey home. By writing down this epic poem, Homer's Odysseus became the catalyst for the generic champion. The characteristics of Odysseus that are the cornerstones for most legends are cleverness, perseverance, and confidence.
Being quick-witted is critical to the stereotyped valiant figure, and Odysseus was constantly using his brilliance to get out of problematic situations. In fact, he was so sharp, Athena, the goddess of wisdom, became fond of him and eventually went to Zeus, the god of all gods, to ask for Odysseus to be allowed to return home. She would also affect Odysseus's appearance by changing him into an old suppliant or "mak[ing] him taller and stronger to look at and [giving] him a crop of busy hair, like a cluster of hyacinth flowers. As when a plating of gold is [lays] over silver by some clever craftsman, who [is learning] all the secrets of his art from Hephaestus and Pallas Athena, and knows how to make works full of grace, so Athena cover[s] his head and shoulders with beauty" to influence those around him (79). Odysseus also ended the ten year Trojan War. He created the Trojan Horse, which contained all of the Greeks’ finest soldiers, and placed it outside of Ilion. Once the Trojans had brought the horse into the gated city and had gone to sleep, the Greeks emerged and conquered the city. There was also a giant cyclopes, Polyphemus, from whom Odysseus escaped. By blinding the one-eyed monster, Odysseus was able to tie himself and crew members onto the bellies of sheep and to slip past the enraged Polyphemus.
The hero's persistence is another admirable quality. For example, Odysseus endured many hardships as he spent 20 years away from his comely wife, Penelope, and his son, Telemachus. In other words, Odysseus' tenacity helped with the tribulations throughout his long period away from home. The many battles he had to face were in themselves arduous. For instance, he had to choose between the deadly whirlpool, Charbydis, who would "[swallow] up the water in a terrible fashion" and destroy his ship and crew or the monster, Scylla, who would eat six of his crew (142). Odysseus chose the lesser of two evils and steered his ship towards Scylla’s cave. He then had to watch his men "shrieking and stretching out their hands to [him] in the death-struggle" only to be consumed by the six headed monster (143). An additional example occurred soon after his men were consumed, when Odysseus' crew came upon an island where Helios' cattle were placed to graze. There, Eurymachos, a trusted crew member of Odysseus, convinced the rest of his shipmates to feast with him on the cattle of the gods. Zeus saw this ignonimous act and destroyed all of Odysseus's men, as well as his ship. However, Calypso, the daughter of Atlas, saw this and saved Odysseus, only then to hold him captive for seven years.
Although intelligent and determined, Odysseus' self assurance can easily be mistaken for narcissism. His cockiness occasionally lead to a few hiccups in his long journey. Poseidon's fury was originally aroused by Odysseus' pompous actions. Polyphemus was Poseidon's son, and when Polyphemus had discovered Odysseus in his cave, he told him his name was Noman. However, after escaping, Odysseus shouted his true name to taunt the blind cyclops. As a result, Odysseus was the target for Posiedon's wrath. One can also sense Odysseus' self-importance when he is under disguise and constantly reiterates his greatness.
Odysseus, the original hero, is a fine example of Greek culture and respectable qualities. However, his ego sometimes prevented him from his desired boon. All in all, Odysseus was greatly admired and honored, and his flaws were overshadowed by his persistence and adroitness.

Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Movie Essay

Movies have been a popular means of entertainment for many years. Many family traditions consist of seeing a newly released movie each Sunday or viewing holiday classics during the appropriate seasons. Since movies have been such a major part of American culture, people have raised their standards from the silent films to high definition sound with amazing computer generated special effects. The most spectacular of these recent high quality motion pictures is Reign Over Me. Reign Over Me is the best movie because it has good actors, emotional involvement, and an engaging plot, without the unnecessary drama that usually apply to these types of flicks.

Don Cheadle and Adam Sandler star in this outstanding picture. Both actors are highly acclaimed entertainers. They appear in other movies that have been nominated for the Oscars, such as Cheadle in Hotel Rwanda . They also have a wide range of acting capablities, for example Sandler's Happy Gilmore, Spanglish, and Punch Drunk Love are all very diverse movies. Cheadle also starred in Talk to Me which was another great film.

Reign Over Me is a poignant and engaging picture because it has the power to make the viewer laugh and cry. In one scene, Sandler's character, Charlie, is talking with the receptionist at Cheadle's character's, Alan's, dentist clinic and Charlie is asking to see asking to see Alan. The receptionist asks him to wait a moment. During this pause Charlie says, "We were old college roommates. I used to sleep in the nude." A more heart-wrenching point in the movie is when Charlie discusses losing his family with Alan. Alan also has some memorable moments in the movie, as in when he is arguing with his wife.

A movie is not any good without an extraordinary storyline. Reign Over Me has a believable plot which is key when the writer of a film script is trying to have people to relate to his work. By using a 9/11 victim, they touch on a tender subject for most Americans. Also, the characters have realistic professions and practical problems. Depression is another hardship that Charlie battles with, which is an ailment many humans suffer from.

One should recommend this flick to his or her friends and family. Reign Over Me is a touching motion picture, with awe-inspiring thespians, and has an excellent string of ancedotes. Even after watching this film several times one still cannot helped to be moved by the touching cinematography displayed in this production.

Personal Poem

caressing grasping slipping gripping
shaking flailing flicking
picking pointing slapping
trapping waving wiping holding hands

joints and ligaments
muscles and tendons
working moving building
blood flowing to outer finger tips
heart pumping breathing assisting

hands make you smile
encourage you to run the sweaty mile
a hand is like the crystallized sugar
lollipop you get at the
end of a doctor's appointment

a life preserver in life's raging storm
a holder of hidden sweet secrets
your accomplices in crime

caressing grasping slipping gripping
shaking flailing flicking
picking pointing slapping
trapping waving wiping holding hands

Tuesday, November 20, 2007

Chinua Achebe's "Things Fall Apart"

Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe is a book about a violent man called Okonkwo. Okonkwo struggles with the fear of becoming his father or the people around him, like his son, Nyowe, becoming his father. Okonkwo's father, Unoka, was lazy and improvident.

The author, Chinua Achebe, grew up with parents who were stuck between the traditional African culture and the new Christian influence. Chinua Achebe was originally called Albert Chinualumogo Achebe. Chinualumogo means "may God fight on my behalf" which is a prayer on divine protection and stability; his five other surviving siblings have similar names.

I like the book so far. The first four chapters are setting the scene for tragic events by developing the character's personalities. Giving Okonkwo a hard childhood allows the audience to sympathize with him even though he's a cruel character. The title even foreshadows future hardships, Things Fall Apart. I predict that this book will not end in happiness.

Monday, October 15, 2007

Silly Sentences

My silly sentences using nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, and prepositional phrases:

1) The chaste banana karate chopped exhubrilantly below the belt.
2) A chaste toaster karate chopped exhubrilantly on top of the car.
3) The silly donkey polished harmoniously behind the barn.
4) A chaste banana tickled reverently behind the barn.
5) A stunning donkey polished harmoniously into the great wide open.

Tuesday, September 25, 2007

Blogging and Paragraph Formula

Blogging is an interesting way to publish your writings. Using the internet as a teaching technique is a recent addition to educating people. A useful tool that has dangerous aspects. Blogging is what is going to replace the paper and pen. This could possibly be a resourceful replacement, but it also replaces the personal meanings associated with getting a letter or writing an essay. Already people recieve a text or IM instead of meeting face to face or a phone call. With the vast expanding internet you'll never ever have to leave your house. You can broadcast yourself through webcams and see your friends the same way. You can order a pizza off the internet and get all your clothes and appliances too. Blogging is just another way to express your self, its just a less personal way.

Paragraph formula is a useful technique for non-fictional informative essays. However, if your trying to free write or do creative writing, I think that this would make the writing process more difficult. Being able to put down your thoughts into organized sentences so that it makes it easier for your audience to understand is a great asset, and whether its outlining your topic or just free writing, as long as it gets down why does it matter how you did it?

Monday, September 24, 2007

Sample Writing

Abi Retallick
Writing Sample
Sophmore English
24 August 2007
My object is a tool. A tool that lets different cultures connect. A device that allows men and women's thoughts to be etched onto the minds of a reader. My object is a pen. My pen.
Originally, my translator of thoughts came from Valley Bank, where Ms. Slater had acquired it. I speculate that she had the said object for a couple of weeks before it came into my possesion.
Then on fated day, my previously owned pen ran out of ink in the middle of my first period class, which happened to be taught by Ms. Slater. Ms. Slater was thankfully generous person and allowed me to borrow my soon to be magical wand of words. Once the period ended, I absentmindly forgot to return my newly aquired creator of joy. Thus forming a bond that can only be broken by a shortage of ink.
I have completed many homework assignments, essays, and tests with my fairy staff of imagination and not once has my loyal pen waned in the flow of ink from its ballpoint tip.
The importance of this inanimate object to me is so great and profound that I am at a loss for words. And even trying to fathom would belittle the very essence of the bond that has been formed between hand and writing utensil. If lost, I would be forced to search the bowels of department stores for a new chisel of past occurences, and reforge a bond, an ancient bond, that has been passed down through generations of authors, students, and an assortment of shopping-list writers.
However, all great things must come to an end, and so must my pen. When the ink is gone and the paint is chipped, I'll look back and fondly remember my "uni-trident" of great works of art and not grieve the loss of a magical tool, but joyfully remember the many times I was blessed to write with my pen.